sam59comm

hay guys, check out are new web site and what we have available at ******. If you have any questions feel free to get in touch anytime.

sam morris
HR manager

LeeStevo

It dosnt work Sam....

Even after login...??

LJ

morrigan

lildev666

good move T!

morrigan

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80085

Morning,

Weblink has now been reinstated to sam59comm's original post, it seems there was a slight technical glitch. All is now resolved.

Regards
Lildev666

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sam59comm

hello there, there was i technical hitch but should be squared away now mate so feel free to get on and hopefully speak again soon.
many thanks,
sam morris

neiljordan

Sam,

I'm being critical here but, I've had a good look at the site. I hope you take it in the nature it's intended.

First, get your spell checker working mate.

Second, check your grammar. It isn't great in places.

This isn't meant to slag off your site, just inform you that there are basic mistakes in the way you're advertising and if I was a potential client then I'd think twice about using you.

For instance: 'perfered' = preferred, 'license' = licence, 'jewelry' = Jewellery, 'ect' = Etc and 'your', when used like this should read 'you are' or 'you're'.

Your 'Covert Security' photo's need to be looked at as well. The 'Deployment' and 'Possition' (Position?) photo's seriously look daft! The other one won't open.

As I said I'm being critical but, you asked us to look at the website and I did.

Regards

Neil

Rosie

Sam,

I hope that you have a strong word of mouth reputation and are not relying heavily on internet-generated business. The combination of photo's and capabilities gives me the impression of a "rent a goon" operation, which may not be your aim, nor that of your staff. Some of the photo's look like they were taken with a mobile phone and it just comes across as a back bedroom operation, which is probably incorrect.

As they say, you get one chance to make a first impression, as a user of outsourced services there is nothing at all to make me want to spend more than 1 second looking at it. I also suspect that you may not be recipient of the calibre of CV's that you may like to have available in that the photo's create in my mind a very poor company image (not only are they full frontal, the DPM stuff is a bit naff, the CP related picture leads to the question of whether the body wearing jeans at the front of the vehicle is part of the team or about to urinate up the tree, not really enticing). Unless of course you are aiming for subscribers to combat & survival or those with a fetish for CROPS.

But then again everyone has an opinion, which should be taken with a big enough pinch of salt. Hope things work out in the current climate but I would seriously consider a revamp of the website, it probably does not do you justice.

Good luck with the venture